hello and welcome to my blog if you don't know me then my name is Annie Tanielu if you want more information about me then go to my blog. As you can see today we room 11 had Phil with us. He told us about this new challenge about 100 words and i thought it was impossible but the more i got into it the more it got easier for me to understand it more. the first step was to make your five words by just discovering a cows valley picture and then you copy your buddy's five words and you put it together to make a 100 word story.
hello and welcome to my blog if you don't know me then my name is Annie Tanielu if you want more information about me then go to my blog. As you can see today we room 11 had Phil with us. He told us about this new challenge about 100 words and i thought it was impossible but the more i thought i got into it the more it got easier for me to understand it more. the first step was to make your five words by just discovering a cows valley picture and then you copy your buddy's five words and you put it together to make a 100 word challenge.
Hi Annie, thanks for sharing on your blog! I think you might have pasted the wrong thing so your story isn't actually here.
ReplyDeleteHi Annie My name is Alvin for YMS I really like your 100 word challenge. I think that you should make the 100 word challenge more intresting. Did you have fun? Do you get rewards if you have completed it?. If you have a chance check out my blog!
ReplyDeleteHi Annie this is Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteWhat are the five words that you just discovered by the cows valley.
There is a lot of writing in here maybe you can put it in a slide or in paragraphs just so it make it more interesting and that people will what to read it.
Kind regards
Michaela
Hi Annie,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this blog post
I like how you explaned how you felt at the time
What are the 5 words you discovered?
Maybe you could think about putting your writing into paragraphs,
That would be very helpful.
Kind Regards
From Lucy
Hi Annie, I'm Renae from Yaldhurst Model school.
ReplyDeleteI am wondering what the 5 words you discovered from cows valley are.
All of the writing was bunched together and a tiny bit hard to read, So maybe next time you could maybe put it on to a slide and split it in half, like and bit of writing on one page and the other bit on the other page.
If you complete the writing do you get a reward or a prize?
If you were supposed to put your writing at the end of the blog You copied the wrong thing.
Who was your buddy?
When you were doing the challenge did you find it fun,interesting or a experiment?
Kind Regards
-Renae-
Hello Annie! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteGood job Annie! I see that you have explained the 100 word challenge very clearly! I know exactly what it is!
I remember when I was younger I thought that writing 100 words was impossible too, but now, here I am writing 1000 words in a story when I set my mind to it! I normally write 200 to 400 words, because I can touch type, which really saves time. I learned it at typing club, a really handy website! Heh, get it? HANDY??? ...
However, something seems to have gone wrong! Perhaps you copied and pasted the wrong thing, because your writing is not there, look into that, after all, I would love to see your writing!
Keep up the good work, and remember to re-read and check your work!
From Hana! :)
Hey there!
ReplyDeleteIm Maddie a year 8 from yaldhurst Model School.
I absolutely love this post and I think that you have done such a good idea I think that this is an amazing way to share a bit about yourself so it can give you bloggers a good idea about you.
I think that a good idea for you to improve on is to just re check your work and spelling to make sure everything makes sense also you could make a dlo to add a pop of colour in your work.
-Maddie
Hi Annie, I'm Mykiala from Yaldhurst Model school.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog.
I really liked how you have told us about some things.
Next time you could space out your writing.
Anyway great job.
MYKIALA YMS!!
MYKIALA YMS!!
Hello Annie,
ReplyDeleteI am Albin, a year 8 at YMS.
That was really cool. It sounds really fun. Finding words looking at a picture. You explained everything clearly.
To make it better you could delete the same repeating stuff. Also you could make a dlo for your future blogs.
Kind regards,
Albin.
Hello Annie,
ReplyDeleteI am Alan from yaldhurst model school.
The 100 word challenge sounds really cool.
If you can,can you show the picture you had to write the 100 word challenge on and for some reason your blog post writing is copied again. If you check on that your blog post will be better than now.
Kind regards
Alan
Kia Ora Annie! My name is Lucy from Wesley Intermediate school. I am really impressed by your one hundred word challenge. It looks really hard. How many tries did it take to get it to a hundred words?
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