we were creating bio poems about ourselves. It was very hard and we ended up making a challenge for ourselves. while creating it we had to rethink of what we disliked and liked.I wouldn't say I would be easy but we tried our best!.
HI Annie I am Alvin, a student from YMS. I really like your Bio poem! It is very intresting because you shared deatils about you. I like how you changed the colour so that we can read the subtitles and the text! Next time you could try making an animation that goes with it. That will make it even better! Other than that great JOB!
Hello Annie. I like how you put in the poem. It is great that you explained what it what like making the poem. Next time,you could make an animation about it. Goodbye, from Max.
Hi Annie! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
Wow Annie, I love the Bio poem! It's very interesting, and not like anything I've ever seen!
I never really knew what a bio poem was, but from your introduction explaining that it was about you, I got a better idea! So thanks! And If I'm honest, you actually seem a lot like me! I like quite a few things that you like, and I like to think that magic exists.
Next time, you could perhaps add some more colour, or a catchy title to draw the reader in!
Kia Ora! My name is Maddison I am a year 8 student and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
I Loved reading your poem and I think that it was an amazing way to let your readers know a bit more about you.I think it is so interesting. I like how you wrote about what it is but I would like to know more about why.
I really liked how you have made it bright colourful to catch your readers eye! Keep up the good work! -Maddie
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way had added your bio poem.
Did you think about telling us more about bio poems.
Next time, you could add more detail to your blog post.
Kind Regards Jorja.
HI Annie I am Alvin, a student from YMS. I really like your Bio poem! It is very intresting because you shared deatils about you. I like how you changed the colour so that we can read the subtitles and the text! Next time you could try making an animation that goes with it. That will make it even better! Other than that great JOB!
ReplyDeleteHi Annie,
ReplyDeleteI am Alan from Yaldhurst model school. You bio poem is great.
I really liked how detailed it was. Why not add why you might want to do the bio poem ? or answer some questions like that.
Kind regards
Alan
Hello Annie. I like how you put in the poem. It is great that you explained what it what like making the poem. Next time,you could make an animation about it. Goodbye, from Max.
ReplyDeleteHi Annie! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Annie, I love the Bio poem! It's very interesting, and not like anything I've ever seen!
I never really knew what a bio poem was, but from your introduction explaining that it was about you, I got a better idea! So thanks! And If I'm honest, you actually seem a lot like me! I like quite a few things that you like, and I like to think that magic exists.
Next time, you could perhaps add some more colour, or a catchy title to draw the reader in!
Great job Annie!
- Hana :D
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 8 student and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
I Loved reading your poem and I think that it was an amazing way to let your readers know a bit more about you.I think it is so interesting. I like how you wrote about what it is but I would like to know more about why.
I really liked how you have made it bright colourful to catch your readers eye! Keep up the good work!
-Maddie
Hey! Annie, I am Mykiala from yaldhurst model school!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good blog.
I loved reading the poem and I think it was amazing to share other what you like to do in your spare time and what you like to eat.
I hope you reply to my comment and that's pls check out my blog!
BYE
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